Good story and a non-pokemon based one too!
I like it, has cats, (I have three cats) cats rule. Interesting Prologue I feel it's more like a chapter though but still it's good 
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| Author: | Truestar [ Tue Apr 19, 2005 7:22 pm ] |
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Hey all! I started this a long time ago, so I will continue it here. If any of you know Warriors, by Erin Hunter, and enjoyed them, this is the unofficial 7th book, Three Clans Born. If you look at my E-Mail and what was my "group", you may have seen SkyClan. That is what I am the leader of in this book. The Characters are all based on friends of mine, and if you want me to add you, please PM me. I will then give you a "Forest Name", and if you like it, then that's you! If not, I'll keep coming up with some. So....here it is! <center>Warriors: Three Clans Born PROLOGUE As the two cats prowled all was quiet. Finally the massive ginger tom spoke up. "So you're saying |
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| Author: | black_flygon [ Tue Apr 19, 2005 7:28 pm ] |
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very interesting story indeed... id like to be in your story...even if i have the name...gayforestfairy....im so loving your story |
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| Author: | Magus [ Tue Apr 19, 2005 7:28 pm ] |
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Good story and a non-pokemon based one too! I like it, has cats, (I have three cats) cats rule. Interesting Prologue I feel it's more like a chapter though but still it's good
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| Author: | Truestar [ Tue Apr 19, 2005 7:33 pm ] |
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I wasn't expecting such complements!  Thanks guys. I'll keep this going.
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| Author: | black_flygon [ Tue Apr 19, 2005 7:36 pm ] |
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you WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or else you will suffer bif time.....nah...just keep it going...its great |
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| Author: | Magus [ Tue Apr 19, 2005 7:39 pm ] |
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by the way: could you add me in your story as 'Shadowstriker'??? If not 'Forestwind' btw: fear black_flygon he'll attack you with his buff Torchic lol. |
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| Author: | black_flygon [ Tue Apr 19, 2005 8:05 pm ] |
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ok....forget about gayforestfairy....maybe a bit more macho...like my buff torchic!!!! btw. imagine if i made a buff blaziken!!!!hahahaha <(X.x)> |
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| Author: | Truestar [ Wed Apr 20, 2005 6:44 am ] |
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Ok, I'll PM you guys your names. I probably should get the next chapter up so  doesn't rip me apart. 
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| Author: | black_flygon [ Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:15 am ] |
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Truestar wrote: Ok, I'll PM you guys your names. I probably should get the next chapter up so doesn't rip me apart. [color=orange]you |
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| Author: | Truestar [ Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:27 am ] |
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Chapter One! Now realize the Prologue was coming out from a different place. This is whee the sotry starts baby! <center>CHAPTER 1 Purrs of amusement rose from Trueheart as he watched the kits try to climb up their leader Starpelt. Truth is, Starpelt was just too massive. "Oh come on Starpelt!" A kit cried out. A second kit cried out, "Mouse brain!" Starpelt's voice rang out. "Ok! That's enough! We don't need to shout nasty insults." Starpelt got up. He walked over to Trueheart. "It's time." Trueheart sighed. "I know. I just don't see why we can't all get along." "I know. But these times are hard. TigerClan won't stop attacking us or LionClan. This time was going to come whether you wanted it to, or not. " Starpelt gave a quick lick on Truehearts ear. "Goodbye, son." Starpelt is Truehearts father. Trueheart is one reason, why Starpelt couldn't receive his proper leadership name. So he still received star in his name. Just not properly. Leaders are preferred by StarClan not to have kin. But love prevailed in the end. And Starpelt had kits. StarClan realized, they could not keep two cats from loving each other. "Goodbye Starpelt." Trueheart rasped. Some time ago, Starpelt told his Clan, of a dream he had.The dream spoke to him, "A true heart will lead the skies |
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| Author: | Truestar [ Tue Apr 26, 2005 3:10 pm ] |
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Somebody voted "It Stinks". I'm not offended in any way, because I put that option in there for a reason. If you voted that, please tell me. If I know what you don't like about it, I may be able to make corrections. However, I'm NOT changing format, storyline etc. |
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