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Author:  zPIRATED [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Pokemon Aqua Blue & Lightning Yellow [ WRITTEN STORIES ]
I have been feeling to write a story on my own Pokemon adventures but I cant really find a suitable place to post it..
Mods feel free to relocate this thread :)
You can also disable my post count in this thread as I will probably double post for each chapter regardless whether or not there is another post.
This AND the 1st Chapter will be separated too so yeah :D

Lets begin the first chapter.. of the new POKEMON CHALLENGE.

Story by : zPirated.
Author:  zPIRATED [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Pokemon Aqua Blue & Lightning Yellow [ WRITTEN STORIES ]
Chapter 1 :
The Awakening of a New Challenge !


Narrator : It was a usual Pokemon Morning. Everything was going fine in Ken's little comfy home.

Ken : Good mornin , Mom ! . Ken greeted his mother on sight.

Mom [ SMILING] : Good morning , Son , Professor Clair 's looking for you. Maybe you should drop by a lab.

Ken : Why would she be looking for me??.. THATS IT !

- Ken dashed out of home without changing out of his sleeping attire -

Ken [ IN A PANICKY VOICE ] : "SORRY IM LATE PROF CLAIR !

P.Clair : "It's okay. So Ken , what kinda Pokemon are you looking for to start out your journey?

- Ken has been spending almost the entire day thinking of which Pokemon to pick from. {pikachu} , {cyndaquil} , {treeko} or {piplup} .

Ken : Well .. I haven't really thought that one out yet..

Narrator : All of a sudden , 2 dirtbag-looking guys barged in the lab.

Grunt 1 :HAND OVER ALL THE POKEMON !

Clair : Team Futuristic. I knew you were both coming.

Grunt 2 : "OF COURSE! , now start Packing.

Clair : You can continue dreaming about laying hands on the Pokemon in my lab !

Clair [ PREPARED FOR BATTLE ] : Go! {arcanine} Arcanine , {nidoqueen} Nidoqueen !

Grunt 1 & 2 : Your Pokemon cant beat ours ! Go {golbat} Golbat!

Clair : {arcanine} use Flamethrower ! {nidoqueen} use Hyper Beam !

-Both Golbats drop down onto the floor , KO'ed.

Grunt 1 & 2 : GOLBAT !!! YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS ! WE'LL BE BACK !

-Grunts leave the building-

Clair : That oughta teach them. Good job you guys , now , return.

- {arcanine} & {nidoqueen} return into their Pokeballs -

Ken [ AMAZED ] : Wow.. CLAIR IS AMAZING !!

Clair [SMILING AND LAUGHING] : You flatter me , well , when I was your age I dreamed to be a Pokemon Champion too .

Clair : So have you chosen?

Ken : Well .. not really..

Ken : Maybe this one .. no ! this ! no.. UGHH THIS IS TOO HARD !!

Clair : Take your time , I'm going out for awhile , you make up your mind while I'm gone kay?

-Clair leaves-

Ken : Urgh .. which one should I pick?!!!

Grunts 1 & 2 : HEY YOU ! WHERE DID CLAIR GO ! WE'RE BACK WITH BACKUP.

-3 Grunts enter-

GRUNTS : LETS GO !!

Grunt 1 & 2 : GOLBAT ! {golbat}

Grunt 3 & 4 : ARBOK ! {arbok}

Grunt 5 : WEEZING ! {weezing}

Ken : WAIT ! SHES NOT -

GRUNTS : GOLBAT WING ATTACK ! ARBOK POISON STING ! WEEZING SLUDGE BOMB !

-Ken gets flung to the back of the room-

Grunt 1 : Whats wrong ? Too scared to fight ? Or do you not have any Pokemon ?

Ken [ THINKING TO HIMSELF ] : I need a Pokemon to fight .. but I havent made up my mind.. I'll just go with whatever comes out !

-Ken randomly grabs a Pokeball-

Ken : GO ! WHATEVER YOU ARE !

- {treeko} appears -

Treeko : Treeko !

Ken : A Treeko ! {treeko}

Ken : Alright Treeko , lets do this ! Use Pound !

- Arbok & Weezing gets hit directly and falls to the floor -

GRUNTS 3,4,5 : WHAT ?!?!?!?!?!?!

Grunts 1 & 2 [ ARROGANTLY ] : A grass type cant stop a Wing Attack ! Go! Golbat !

Ken : Treeko dodge those wings and use pound from below !

- Treeko dashes off to Ken's command -

- Treeko hits one of the Golbats before leaping into the air for another attack -

- Both Golbats get KO'ed -

Grunts : We.. got beaten by a brat ? This cant be happening ! Lets fall back !

- Grunts run off -

- Clair returns -

Clair [ STARING AT THE MESS ] : WHAT HAPPENED HERE !?!?!

Ken : I CAN EXPLAIN !

Clair : Never mind , probably those dirty lil Futuristic Grunts.

Clair : So Ken , it seems you chose Treeko huh?

Ken : I guess so.. it seems as if we were destined to be together

[ LAUGHS ]

Ken : Well , Treeko ! Return !

- {treeko} returns into his ball -

Clair : Well Ken , you are now an official Pokemon trainer. Take this , its a Pokedex. It'll help you alot. And you cant catch Pokemon without Pokeballs !

- Hands them to Ken -

Ken : THANKS CLAIR ! I wont make you disappointed.

Clair : You better !

- Ken exits the lab and goes home to tell his mom about his journey -

Ken [ IN BED ] : Tomorrow is the day ! The day I set out on my journey with Treeko.

Narrator : With new heroes comes new partners. What will our hero seek ? Stay tuned to Pokemon Aqua Blue & Lightning Yellow !
Author:  torchie13125 [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Pokemon Aqua Blue & Lightning Yellow [ WRITTEN STORIES ]
Good start! But, where's the chapter?
Oh, and this should be in the Canalave Library topic, since it's a story.
Author:  zPIRATED [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Pokemon Aqua Blue & Lightning Yellow [ WRITTEN STORIES ]
torchie13125 wrote:
Good start! But, where's the chapter?
Oh, and this should be in the Canalave Library topic, since it's a story.


Its up ! :)
I think its a horrible first chapter.. any ideas feel free to PM :)
Author:  zPIRATED [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:54 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Pokemon Aqua Blue & Lightning Yellow [ WRITTEN STORIES ]
Chapter 1.1
The First Encounter !

Narrator : Where we last left our hero , he has just acquired his first Pokemon and sets out on his journey. Now , we find him in a face of against a wild {nidoran} in the Evergrand Forest .

Ken : Go Pokeball !!

- The Pokeball hits Nidoran [M] and captures it , but it breaks free in a matter of seconds -

Ken : WHAT !! HIS STRONG ! Guess we'll have to do this the hard way huh ?

Ken : Treeko ! I choose you !

{treeko} : Treeko ! [ Puts twig in mounth ]

Ken : Treeko ! Show him whose boss ! Use Pound !

- Treeko hits Nidoran [M] with his powerful Pound attack , knocking Nidoran against a tree -

Ken : Now , lets try that again ! Pokeball !

- Ken has successfully caught the wild {nidoran} -

Ken : I DID IT !!

??? : Pokeball ! Go !

Ken : WOW ! HE MUST BE A STRONG TRAINER ! HE CAUGHT 3 PIDGEYS IN 1 SHOT !

??? : Hmm... all of you are worthless pieces of junk .

- Releases the 3 {pidgey} into the sky -

Ken : HEY ! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING WITH THOSE PIDGEYS !

??? : Their all useless and are not worthy of being in my time..

Ken : Why you ....

??? : Whats wrong ? Your a Pokemon trainer too aren't you , so why are you acting all lovey dovey to all the Pokemon ?

Ken : Pokemon are not just your toys for battling , their our friends and family ! I will never forgive anyone who mistreats them !

- Ken holds his Pokeball , preparing to battle -

??? : You want a battle huh ? You gotta be kidding .. newbie

Ken : Go Treeko , Nidoran ! Use your Pound and Tackle attacks !

??? : Charmeleon {charmeleon} standby for battle !

{charmeleon} : Char !

??? : Charmeleon , use Fire Spin !

Ken : WHAT ?!

Pokemon : Treeeeeeee !! Nido !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

- Both of Ken's Pokemon drop down KO'ed -

??? : The next time you challenge another Trainer , make sure you dont lose.

- ??? Walks away -

Ken : Hang in there guys ! I'll get you 2 to a Pokemon Centre right away !

- Ken goes to a Pokemon Centre before heading back into the forest -

Ken [ THINKING ] : "The next time you challenge another Trainer , make sure you dont lose. " ; The next time we meet, I'm sure I'll win..

Referee : At the Blue Corner , we have Pokemon Challenger , REX !!

Referee : And at the Red Corner . presenting ... GYM LEADER RAUL !!!

- Crowd Cheers -

Raul : Lets get things started up , Pidgeotto {pidgeotto} !

Rex : Elekid {elekid} ! Standby for battle !

{elekid} : Elekid !

Rex : Elekid , finish things off in 1 blow , Thunderbolt !

{elekid} : Elee.. KIDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD !

Raul : Dodge it Pidgeotto !

- Pidgeotto dodges but its left wings gets hit , causing it to drop to the ground -

Rex : Now ! Thunder Punch !

Pidgeotto : Pidgeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !

- Pidgeotto is KO'ed -

Raul : Pidg...eotto....

Raul : I'm not done yet !! [ 3 Pokeballs in between his fingers ]

- Ken enters the Gym -

Ken : I'm looking for a Gym Chall- WHAT ?!

Ken : Its you !

Raul [ ON THE FLOOR ON HIS FOURS ]: I can't believe it ... I couldn't even take down a single one of his Pokemon ...

Ken [ THINKING ] : What ?? He beat the Gym Leader effortlessly? ..

Rex [ STARING AT KEN ] : We meet again ... Ken.

Narrator : So it has been shown , who is this powerful trainer known as Rex? Will he battle our hero ? Find out next time !
Author:  Edoc'sil [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Pokemon Aqua Blue & Lightning Yellow [ WRITTEN STORIES ]
The story is good, but it sounds a bit too much like Ash and Paul to me.And I love how in the first part, everyone gets murdered by weak attacks.
Author:  zPIRATED [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:06 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Pokemon Aqua Blue & Lightning Yellow [ WRITTEN STORIES ]
I agree on the Paul part. A trainer that only cares bout power is something suited for a rival of person who loves Pokemon.
Besides , I was considering to make the main dude all badass but that just doesnt seem to fit..
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